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Soul x SWMarie ✨'s avatar

“The universe quivers each time your breath hitches” GODDAMN. This was sooooo fire Shawn. Ugh I love it!!!! Beautiful writing as always. 🔥🥰🤞🏽✨🫶🏽

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Thaaaank you Marie! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I was nervous af 😭😭😅😅

Soul x SWMarie ✨'s avatar

Lmaooo I know you were now I’m wondering why!! Cause hello??? You did that!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Lmaoooo you right 😭😭😭 🔥🔥🙌🏿🙌🏿😮‍💨😮‍💨

Crystal Nacolle Dunivant's avatar

“I coax your embers into a fire,

until you’re flames roar with desire”🔥🔥🔥

Shawn Taylor's avatar

You seeee it 😮‍💨😮‍💨🔥🔥

Mocha_Kathy's avatar

Beautiful piece. No lies detected…..er’body I know is horny right now and if they read this, then you’re just throwing lighter fluid onto said loins! 🔥🥵🤣Love the playlist

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Thank you so much! 🫶🏿💙

😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣 it’s something in the air rn that got everybody in heat 😭😭😭 Spring has sprung 🤣🤣🤣

Brianna Perry's avatar

Excuse me, I wasn’t prepared!

Shawn Taylor's avatar

🤭🤭🤭

Danielle's avatar

Ohhhhh so this is what we doing on a Thursday!!! 😍 these voice overs too Shawn ! You gotta keep it up! Absolutely amazing !!!!

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Exactly what type of time I’m on today 🤭🤭 I’ll definitely keep it up. Thank you so much 🫶🏿💙

Denise Jackson's avatar

My my my 🤏🏽🤏🏽

I’m finna text the Mr.

Yesss Shawn! Keep going. Playlist and pen is on fire 🔥

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Yeeessss text ya man and let him know! 🤭🤭 Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

J.R. Whittington's avatar

Good morning to me.

God really blessed you—in your mind, in your pen, in the way your words touch. And your anointing found me—laying itself in my hands, quiet and knowing.

That was fucking beautiful.

Shawn Taylor's avatar

🤭🤭 I’m grateful for your kind words. I’m happy my words could sit with you this morning 🤭🤭🫶🏿🫶🏿💙💙

Dr. Aleea Zamani's avatar

Okay Shawn!! 🙂‍↕️🥰

Shawn Taylor's avatar

🤭🤭🥰🥰

lotus journal's avatar

sir! sounds like we are not the only ones in heat!🤭 the ENTIRE piece, but "the creator is a craftswoman" 🔥🔥🔥

Shawn Taylor's avatar

🤭🤭 it’s a universal feeling 😂😂

🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿 That’s one of my favorite lines 🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿

Elizabeth Títílọlá ✨'s avatar

Oooooo you nasty! 🤭🤭🤭 this will definitely awaken SOMETHING in some-BOD-Y!! 🤗👏🏾

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Just a lil bit 😂😂

🤭🤭 🤗🤗

Joy Path's avatar

First off, this needs a NSFW label, especially with that VOICE!

I love it all but it's this quiet little line for me:

"The universe quivers each time your breath hitches

whenever my lips meet your skin"

And finally, I laughed hard when I read this in your intro (because it's TRUE):

"Then I started thinking about how all you horny niggas are coming out of hibernation, and every conversation sounds like commentary from a mating special on the Discovery Channel. Seriously, it seems like everybody’s loins are on fire."

😂😂😂

Shawn Taylor's avatar

🤭🤭 I thought about that after it published like damn people finna be at work listening to this 😭😭😂😂

That’s one of my favorite lines from this one! I’m glad that one landed with you!

😂😂🤣🤣 the conversations been going crazy 😭😭😭😂😂😂 like everybody go for walk rn

Nova Solace's avatar

You done did it with this, I’m in complete admiration right now because what!!! lol so gifted with the word flow. I love how each of your poems create a certain atmosphere, love the energy being captured here. Now I have “there’s a meeting in my bedroom” by silk playing in my head 🙃 Keep on doing your thang thang! 👏🏽

Shawn Taylor's avatar

Thank you so much 🥹🥹 I really appreciate you and your kind words! I’m glad you loved this piece! Oooo I need to add that song to the playlist haha!

Cauren - Tropical Fairy Cove's avatar

Reading this while the sun set...I need a glass of wine now with this playlist! You have songs on here that are my favorites 😍you have the music ear! I saved the best for last, your words!!!! This is Jill Scott Running Cross My Mind and Crown Royal vibes and I love it!!!!!! 😍🧚🏾‍♀️

shadress denise's avatar

Bravo 🤌🏾👏🏾

Jas's avatar

Shawnnnnn 😮‍💨🔥 this was so ridiculously good from top to bottom. “the creator is a craftswoman and I inherited those gifts” being the first line??? yeah you were absolutely in your bag with this one